the vintner's child
the vintners childmaster of soil and rain by the grace of bacchusand the love he bares forthe vine and grape.bottles, green as emeralds, blown by lips that have kisseda thousand sweetnesses,lay in...
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"so forgotten only the feelings are leftwhere."Dionysus (Bacchus) the God of wine....first the colours and the myth dropped on my mind, thenWhat an interesting poem!It was kind of journey in your...
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Rhiannon you have done an admiable job on this overworked subject with some really good language. I am 1st degree wino so I know I think that in general a few sips, I mean nips, no no snips! here and...
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Rhia,I'll not attempt to crit your work on my own, as it is much better than anything I've ever written, however I will make a couple of comments on what has already been written.I agree with most...
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I agree with much of Josh's crit as well.The title really grabbed my interest.I like the images, the rich language. I do think it needs some trimming to make it really rock.Thanks for sharing...I...
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frankly i wouldnt touch a line of this...its full of insight and the words meld brilliantly absolutely brilliantly...my hats off to the poetamazing worklouisoverworked subject? rubbish... this is...
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